http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Kx88pSh3LA&feature=feedu
Not too bad but only switching between pieces for the whole video gets a little repetitive after a while. Maybe you could add in some other ideas to make it a little more dynamic. What program did you use for the animation?
Cinema 4d
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Kx88pSh3LA&feature=feedu