1500 elo game analysis 3

The third part of my annotated games for beginner-intermediate players. Unlike the first two in this one I lose - to the same problem as many players my level. The problem I refer to is simply missing the entire mating threat your opponent sets up. Not exactly a graceful game!

The forums is not holding a competition as to who can make the most mistakes in a chess game are they? And if you are targeting beginners, perhaps you should explain the "clear" mistakes that they might not otherwise understand.

I see complaints on high leveled analysis about there being a lack of annotated games at the intermediate level, so I figured I would post some of my annotations seeing as I am doing them regardless. Also I figure that since the "clear" mistakes all have their punishment shown people can probably figure it out.

If you are going to do the analysis, you're the one that should show the stuff. They shouldnt have to figure out the stuff unless you are asking them to do the analysis for you.

"Also I figure that since the "clear" mistakes all have their punishment shown people can probably figure it out."

There is nothing else I can do to make it more clear.