seems ok to me. basic enough game imo. One think that popped out at me were the moves by both sides of Ph5 and Ph4 which as far as i can see was a waste of tempo from both sides as it does nothing and creates a weakness on g5 and also g4 for either side.
I only looked quickly and im tired and cranky................
Played my third OTB game tonight. Thought it was pretty straight-forward after 25. Nd2 Rd8 but before that was pretty weak on the queenside, with better play my opponent might have gone a pawn up.
Any comments appreciated.