2. ... Qe7 It's generally not a good idea to use your queen so early. A better opponent will use it against you to get a lead in development (more pieces off the back rank).
Your position gets very cramped.When playing you should think about how to get all your pieces off the back row and doing something active.
The whole idea leading up to 9. ... Nxf2 is wrong. You are giving up your knight for no reason. One pawn and preventing white from castling when you have no way to attack the king isn't close to being worth the value of a knight.
Hi all. I just won what was, for me, a rather difficult but very satisfying game. Now I know I screwed up here and there along the way and somewhere in the middle I wasn't so sure I was going to come out of it in good condition at all. But somehow serendipity smiled on me.
I'd just love for some of the you more vetted chessaholics to dissect this and critique please. You don't have to mince words. I know I'm just a beginner. And anyway I appreciate honesty, even if it is brutal. Truth hurts!
I flipped the board for black's (my) perspective. Ratings shown are what they were when the match began.
Without further ado then: